Ricki Herrera
Professor Kufs
English 114 B
April 5th, 2016
Essay
Revision Analysis
My
second revision process to writing this essay started off with looking at all
the comments and corrections that my peer made on my rough draft. I looked them
over and decided if I wanted to use them or not. Some of the corrections they
made I did not agree with, but some other corrections I did agree with and took
it into consideration when I was revising my essay. A struggle I had on this
essay was not having enough to write about and how short the essay was. I went
through each paragraph slowly, sentence by sentence, and see how I could
elaborate my sentences more. I then looked online again to add more analysis to
to my essay. When revising my essays, I like to highlight all my “it’s” I do
this because sometimes when using the word “it” people do not know what you’re
talking about. Highlighting also shows me how much I actually used the word
“it”. Also, I highlight the word “that” because just like “it” its better if I
use another word. This is also another difficult thing because its hard for me
to find other words to use. I also look at all my punctuations and look to see
if I use the correct form of punctuation. I looked to make sure I had no
contractions. Some of the sentences I wrote were pretty short, so I expanded
them. I also looked through each paragraph to make sure that I did not go off
topic. In my conclusion, paragraph I restated my thesis, and also put in a
quote to close my essay.
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